Revision- Article
I asked my classmates what changes I should make to my article, and I got a lot of helpful feedback. Many of them believed that my interview could have been more visually appealing. Suggestions like adding more color, having a center of focus or dominant photo, and having more images were among the most popular. Because the response was so unanimous, it was very easy for me to pinpoint my weak spots and attempt to improve my magazine.
There were many changes I made to my magazine's article. To begin with, I enlarged the image of Debra Markley, my interviewee, on the first page to make it a dominant photo and a center of focus. I also made the photo on the second page larger and placed it in a more central position to give the page the extra flair it needed. I looked into adding more images, but it was not feasible because the text would be cut off if I did; I had to delete a paragraph just when I made the image on page two slightly larger. I made the title of the article a bit darker and created a blue gradient on the page. This creates more color and makes the document less bland. I also added a 1/2 point border to the first image and a 1 point border to the second image. It is not the most noticeable, so it makes the photographs stand out without being too disruptive. My revised magazine article is shown below as the two larger images while the original document is the two smaller pictures at the bottom.
There were many changes I made to my magazine's article. To begin with, I enlarged the image of Debra Markley, my interviewee, on the first page to make it a dominant photo and a center of focus. I also made the photo on the second page larger and placed it in a more central position to give the page the extra flair it needed. I looked into adding more images, but it was not feasible because the text would be cut off if I did; I had to delete a paragraph just when I made the image on page two slightly larger. I made the title of the article a bit darker and created a blue gradient on the page. This creates more color and makes the document less bland. I also added a 1/2 point border to the first image and a 1 point border to the second image. It is not the most noticeable, so it makes the photographs stand out without being too disruptive. My revised magazine article is shown below as the two larger images while the original document is the two smaller pictures at the bottom.
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